I see where the Samsung and Kingston are NVME PCIE Gen 4.0. The biostar is Sata III.How did you format your flash drive? Is NVME Raid enabled in the bios and in which slot have you installed your boot drive?
Sorry to hear of your challenges. Please ensure that you have connected the 8 pin power plug, or both the 8 pin and 4 pin power plug. These connections supply power to the CPU. If this is not the problem then check your PSU.
This works perfectly on my Crosshair VI Extreme https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B077SSV15R/ref=ppx_yo_dt_b_asin_title_o01_s00?ie=UTF8&psc=1. I use it on the M.2_2 slot.
My first question is where have you installed the PCIE card. Secondly, does the SSD operate in SATA or PCIE mode. The fact is your card needs to be connected to PCIE X8 / X4_2 because it is wired to the CPU. I am not sure about PCIE X4_3 it is conne...